Name: Rage
Species: Human
Age: 30
Faction: N/A
Alignment: Neutral

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Strengths
-Quick thinking.
- Fast
Weaknesses
-Lacks complete control of power.
-Feared by civilians, especially antique salesmen.
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Equipment
-Brown graphene jacket, extremely tough, can withstand many things. Family heirloom.
-Basic civilian clothing (blue jeans, black shirt, and tennis shoes)
-Talon (https://convergencerp.rpg-board.net/t1916-talon-the-dagger-of-adaptibility)
Powers
-Supernatural ability to break objects as strong as metal with just a single touch, although useful, it tends to have a mind of it's own. As Rage's heart rate increases, the amount of unintentional breaking rises. The ability works by releasing subtle vibrations that undo the bonds between the objects affected, causing it to break or collapse. The closer Rage is to the target, the more effective the break, with a maximum range of 1m.

History
Rage: I come from a long line of talent bearers. For millennia, my ancestors had taken on the terrible burden of talents- dark powers capable of amazing power. To keep others safe we lock the talents within us and pass them down our bloodline. I, being the last of my family, must now prevent the escape of the talents by taking on the most dangerous of them all, the breaking talent. It is said the one who wields this talent has the ability to 'break' the others until a worthy successor emerges to take on one of the talents. I, however, resent this prophecy. No longer shall the world bear with these dark powers. So, until I manage to find a way to erase them for good, I shall not continue my blood.

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RAGE wrote:

-Supernatural ability to break almost anything with just a single touch, both physical objects and certain forms of energy (such as Kinetic energy)

Breaking "almost anything" is extremely powerful. Maybe adjust this to breaking materials up to metal.

Can I keep the breaking energy thing, or get rid of that. I only really have to break kinetic energy so I could break my falls. But if thats no good then I can change it.

If used to break your falls at reasonably vast distances sure I see no problem there.

Cool

Another thing, should I submit my jacket to get approved or is it ok? It's just a jacket made of a really strong material.

Yeah submit it under equipment if you would kindly

Ok, so I changed up the ability and gave it some reasoning. Got rid of the breaking falls thing (because I realized that could render Talon's grapple moot) so now it only breaks things up to metal. Gave a Maximum range and a danger to himself and the immediate area. If more changes must be made, please let me know. I'm very much new here and want to be on good standings with everyone, so apologizes if I created some confusion or wasted valuable time.
 
I could also still do an origin thread for the power if need be, although I am not entirely sure as to how to go about that.

Aright everything seems in order.

As for the origin story you can simply do a backstory thread set in the past where your character develops the power as it was passed unto him,use it as a development thread that also details your character's history like how he got to the point he became the only member of his family or so but atm I say that the power is justified for the thread you are currently on

Is there a specific place I should post the origin? Or is the general Galaxy page ok?

the Galaxy page is ok

Yeh

So I finished the origin story, if it needs more detail or whatever let me know.

https://convergencerp.rpg-board.net/t1953-origin-of-the-dark-talent#11381