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Approved#1PostSubject: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyMon Feb 13, 2017 10:26 pm

Name: Blaze Song
Owner: Currently owned by Lineak but anybody can use it.
Creator: Unknown and that is going to be part of the problem.


Development Thread: oh crap (private rp) https://convergencerp.rpg-board.net/t522-oh-crap#3565

Type: Shotgun
Ammo: Twelve guage runds however they have magical properties.
Rarity: Rare


Strengths
Short range magical damage with a variety of effects.  I'll list them below:

Standard shells imbued with element of fire.  These rounds burn incredibly hot causing fire damage to objects hit.  They are not very usefull against most enemies as the high heat emmitted tends to cauterize the wounds as soon as the bullet passes through.

Incendiary round ignites after impact engulfing the point of impact in flames
Napalm
Explosive Round
Chain Lightning

Weaknesses
Good only for short range, rounds are extremely limited at this point, information on the gun is unknown.


Description
Blaze Song looks like just another pump shotgun.  It holds five 12 guage shells in its magazine.  Only after you dive deeper do you discover the intricacies of the weapon.  Lining the interior of the barrell are engraved runes that are fire elemental in nature.  The creator of the weapon in unknown but prior to being in Lineak's possession it was in the hands of a woman known as Lydia.  Some of her backstory will be in the oh crap rp.  The runes inside the barrell by themselves give any normal ammo a fire element do their damage.  There are however special ammuntions available.  These ammuntions are incredibly difficult to come by as they take somebody familiar with Blaze Song and also with the creation of the particular runes needed to be engraved unto each of the shotgun shells.  The shells when used in a traditional weapon do not act any differently.  It is only when used in conjunction with Blaze Song and the runes within that they combine to form the magical effects listed above.


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Approved#2PostSubject: Re: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyTue Feb 14, 2017 9:27 pm

Looking good. There's a few problems, however.

1. 
Lineak wrote:
Pending approval will be using it briefly in the oh crap thread (private rp)

Your thread does not need to be graded before using it as a development thread. On the same key, the development thread is simply the thread where you found the gun.

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Lineak wrote:
Standard shells imbued with element of fire
Lineak wrote:
Incendiary round

These are two conflicting statements that can cause a lot of confusion. Do the standard shells set people on fire? Or is the the incendiary rounds' job? Please clarify with your edit.
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Otherwise, your gun is looking pretty awesome, please reply once you've made the edits.
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Approved#3PostSubject: Re: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyTue Feb 14, 2017 9:41 pm

Ok think I fixed the issues you noted.
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Approved#4PostSubject: Re: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyTue Feb 14, 2017 9:41 pm

Please link the development thread, don't just give us the title. Sorry I forgot to mention it earlier.
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Approved#5PostSubject: Re: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyTue Feb 14, 2017 10:07 pm

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Approved#6PostSubject: Re: Blaze Song take two   Blaze Song take two EmptyTue Feb 14, 2017 10:24 pm

Thank you, approved.
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