Name: D-76 "Alphari" Boarding Vessel
Owner: Potrosi Captialbarrons
Manufacturer: Potrosi Capitalbarrons


Development Thread: N/A

Materials: An assortment of fusion and combustion engines, alongside thick carbon nanotubing and thick titanium
Length: 50 meters
Rarity: Common

Grades
Speed- 3
Armor- 9
Weapons- 3
Maneuverability- 1

Weapons: The ship's only weaponry is a single large (3 meters long) dual railgun on the ship's underside and several las-gun turrets placed in its starboard side. On its port side, there are several hollow drills used for peeling through enemy ship armor and allowing a boarding party to enter.

Armour: The ship can deflect almost any small lasers or bullets, but can be eaten through by plasma or pulse technology.

Shields: Minor shields protect the ship furthermore, keeping it further safe from small arms fire.

Speed: Up to 325 miles per hour when not in hyperjump.

Maneuvers: It is slow, but can maneuver surprisingly well for its size and speed.

Notable Equipment
-2 Large (4 meters across) drills which extend from the ship's port side to drill through enemy ship hulls. They are hollow, and peel open to allow boarding parties to pass through. 

Description
Weighing 80 tons, an Alphari Boarding Ship can be a hefty ram, although it is definitely not advised. They are usually made of mainly cargo hold, carrying a large amount of Slag and possibly a Stoic Fighter ready to launch to attack while the Alphari boards with its Slag cargo. The ship is usually piloted by a single Potrosi technician who relays commands to the Slag.

Weaknesses: The ship is generally a slow moving ship in comparison with other ships of equal size, and several well-placed hits on its main thrusters could blow the entire thing up

Yo there. It's me, Elias, and it's time for a review...

1. Boarding isn't a stat. Please remove that and note it's boarding ability under notable equipment, though you have already done so in the description.

2. You did not list a number for the speed stat. Not to mention, 65 miles per hour is extremely slow on a galactic scale, so you may want to raise that a lot.

3. Put some of the ship's weaknesses in the description.

Edit: What exactly are 'space-age metals'? That is nowhere near specific enough. If you want a recommendation though, titanium makes for a very solid "space-age metal".

Edited, and the boarding ability is already noted under notable equipment with the drills.

You did not list a grade number for speed, please do that.

Yes there is.

Speed- 3

Approved

Well balanced, but placing under review due to banned author