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 Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C

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Under Review#1PostSubject: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 9:36 pm

Name: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C
Owner: Nypherian Empire
Manufacturer: Nypherian Empire
Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C Nypher13

Development Thread: N/A

Materials: Harbenite
Length: 500 Meters
Rarity: Common

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Grade the aspects of the ship below between 1-10. 1 being severely lacking in that aspect, 10 being specialized. Keep things balanced.
Weapons: 5
Armour: 8
Shields: 7
Speed: 5
Maneuvers: 4

Notable Equipment
It has only 20 turbo-cannons and corrosive missile placements. The main weapon is a gravity well. It prevents ships from entering slip-space or warping away. This also effects Nypherian Ships as well. The range on the gravity well is 1 LS ( Light Second )186,282  Miles . Once any ship leaves the system or destroys the ship. They can escape.

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The crew size is much smaller compared to most ships. Most of the ship is controlled by AI, along with the weapons. The crew is mainly used to maintain the Gravity Well that is within the ship. They're also there for communications and soldiers to prevent enemy bordering. These ships sometimes are alone within small fleets bt in large there are a total of four of these specific ships. They're faster than most frigates but weaker in firepower. Their shields and armor is still considered strong among other Empire ships.


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Under Review#2PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 9:51 pm

Finally, a ship I recognize. That's a Vulcan D'kyr class science cruiser (I think)

Nergasms aside, there's a few problems with this ship.

1. Starship rules state "Ships at 1,000 meters or above require a development thread. Minimum, 10 posts and 1 writer."

Since that's the case, either you're gonna need a dev thread or shorten the ship a bit.

2. I'm not sure the idea that absolutely no ship present can warp away while the interdictor is active, even if it affects Nypherian ships too.

I'll talk to Sam about it, but as of right now, I feel like you should limit the area that the interdictor system can affect and add a minimum ship size it takes to be caught. Or perhaps making an effective way to counter it. Preventing escape is a powerful ability. If you did a dev thread, I'm sure this power would get few limitations.
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Under Review#3PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 9:55 pm

Got it. Will do some tweaks.
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Under Review#4PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 10:06 pm

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Under Review#5PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 10:37 pm

Ship size looks good, but the interdictor field is kind of massive. You should trim it down a lot and maybe add a minimum ship size that's affected by it.
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Under Review#6PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 10:54 pm

Updated through 1 LS 186,282 miles
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Under Review#7PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptyWed Feb 01, 2017 11:02 pm

Looks good, approved.
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Under Review#8PostSubject: Re: Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C   Nypherian Interdictor IGW-457C EmptySat Oct 21, 2017 11:06 pm

Banned user wrote it and approved by a banned moderator.  Also kind of rushed and lazy in the single light second gravity well.  Honestly, keeping ships from jumping away, you should have at least ten light minutes.

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