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 BCMS-001 (Crusher)

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Approved#1PostSubject: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 12:27 am

BCMS-001 (Crusher) D8b6243dbbe764fb239dbfa02de294ed

Name: BCMS- 001 (Crusher)
Owner: The Blackguard Coalition

Manufacturer: Venser-Roth Merchant Consortium of The Blackguard Coalition



Development Thread: N/A


Materials: Titanium-A

Length: 6 Meters
Height:20 Meters

Rarity: Mass Produced


Grades

Weapons: 8
Armour: 7
Shields: 4
Speed: 7
Maneuvers: 5


Notable Equipment
Standard Weaponry

Plasma Swords: Dense plasma swords that deal high amounts of pierce damage to whatever they hit. Typically used for close quarter combat with other mobile suits or ships.

HAMR Cannons: Highly Alternating Mass Rounds or HAMR rounds for short are a new invention of the Coalition. These rounds contain a hardened outer shell much like a bullet or torpedo but, contains a fluxating mass of plasma in the core. The causes not only kinetic damage but also the plasma will spread out much like a water balloon, destroying large areas.





Breaching Attachments for breaking and entering enemy warships.this attachment hooks into the hull of a ship, attempts to cut through the hull, and create a entry for the pilot/passengers to enter into the breach. Enemy ships defend against the attempts to breach as normal and can even repel the breach attempts.


Orbital Drop Package: Capable of being dropped from orbit directly into planetary war zones

Optional personnel carrier (carries vips or additional troops for boarding/planetary attacks)

Optional: Heavy Plated Shields: Some Crushers carry extremely heavy shields capable of taking extra damage. Usually used when attempting to siege a highly defensed position. Lower maneuverability when equipped.

Description

The most common Mobile Suit of the Coalition, the BCMS-001 is the most mass produced mobile suit that the Coalition uses. The primary use of this vessel is to engage other assault ships and breaching ships during battle as well as engage ground forces or siege cities. The downside to this is the lack of shielding and the maneuverability, while the BCMS-001 may have superior armor and weapons system than most other mobile suits, it comes at a price of bit being able to maneuver as quickly and having a less than optimal shielding system.


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Approved#2PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 12:45 am

This... confuses me. You're creating a ship with boarding party capabilities, yet it has guns too? And it's a battlesuit? (you should fix the pic). There's a few problems here.

1. The plasma sword seems awfully powerful, especially for a mass-produced mech. Make it weaker or remove it.

2. It wouldn't make sense if this single ship alone could disable a much larger ship alone with it's EMP rounds. State that it can only partially disable (i.e. a turret) a part of a larger ship with it's EMP rounds.

3. Your optional heavy shields sound incredibly powerful for a simple reduction in maneuverability. Perhaps instead of saying "take even the hardest hit", say "Take additional damage"

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4. Your stat numbers are way too high for a ship that is both mass produced and from a non-faction. Dial them down. A lot. Besides, you cannot possibly have a high maneuverability in addition to lots of damage and armor. That just isn't balanced.

5. Your description does not discuss the drawbacks of the suit, you must describe them.
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Approved#3PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 1:54 am

Ok edited to match what you said
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Approved#4PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 2:49 am

You have 8 weapons and 8 armor, and 8 maneuvers. Two of these have to be dialed down to a 7 and a 6 to perfectly balance this.
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Approved#5PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 3:05 am

Ok reduced one 8 to 7, one 8 to 5, and moved one 6 to 7
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Approved#6PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptyWed Feb 22, 2017 3:44 am

Looking good enough to me, approved.
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Approved#7PostSubject: Re: BCMS-001 (Crusher)   BCMS-001 (Crusher) EmptySat Oct 21, 2017 11:19 pm

While approved by a banned admin, I must admit this is a very well balanced and built unit.  Leaving it alone.
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