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| #1Subject: Berserker viral Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:15 pm | |
| Name: Berserker space carrier Owner: The immortals Manufacturer: Berserker & the Bylian arms company Materials: Armored Dwarven Titanium Length: 1475 meters Rarity: rare Grades Grade the aspects of the ship below between 1-10. 1 being severely lacking in that aspect, 10 being specialized. Keep things balanced. Weapons: 5 Armour: 10 Shields: 8 Speed: 2 Maneuvers: 1 Notable Equipment standard weaponry such as missiles and energy torpedoes are on each immortal branded ship, though in a scuffle the berserker virals do not so much rely on their external weaponry as they do on their crew. the virals get their name due to their attack strategy wich is through boarding parties, the so called 'raiding parties' who enter the ship and kill enemy soldiers and disable offensive abilities, free prisoners and generally wreak havoc to disrupt the enemy attack efficiency, to help raiding parties board, virals make use of so called 'impalers' wich are small projectiles shot out and proppeled by rockets, designed to crash through gates and into hangars, the impalers have teleporters inside that the raiding parties will use to board the ship. Description the ship was created before imm'enne when the dracholmian government felt that they were ready to face the galactic dangers. though of course they couldnt go to outer space in their underwear, so berserker vehicle company and the renowned bylian arms company were commisioned to create a spacecraft, though the ship is large and powerfull, it does suffer from certain drawbacks. for example the speed and maneuvrability require skilled captains or the ship could be sitting ducks. the ship is not ressistant at all against boarders and has little to no external defense against them (though be wary of the crew inside...). another drawback the viral has is that there is no place for fighter jets, wich the immortals dont own yet anyway.
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| #2Subject: Re: Berserker viral Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:24 pm | |
| Your armor and shields are super high for a common ship, especially for one without a development thread. Also, you need to more accurately describe the strengths and drawbacks in the description. |
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| #3Subject: Re: Berserker viral Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:37 pm | |
| edited and added the dev thread. |
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| #4Subject: Re: Berserker viral Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:51 pm | |
| For a common ship, your shields and armor are still incredibly high. You need to reduce those numbers.
Edit: You need to have a 10 post dev thread in order to create a ship 1,000-1,7000 meters long. |
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| #5Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat Mar 11, 2017 10:14 pm | |
| reduced the shields to 8 and posted 10 replies to the development thread telling to story of the mission of the first prototype of this ship. |
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| #6Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat Mar 11, 2017 10:56 pm | |
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| #7Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 13, 2017 3:01 am | |
| It's been brought to my attention that this ship has teleporters. I do not recall teleporters being on this ship when I graded it originally.
With that said, it is a stretch to believe that the Immortals would have teleporter technology, nor have I ever seen a development thread for such a powerful technology. Please remove this and I'll approve it again. |
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| #8Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 13, 2017 1:49 pm | |
| the impalers have always been on there, and the immortals have the grizzle lifeline wich was a long range one way teleporter wich was again approved by you, so the immortals are in fact in possesion of teleportation technology. |
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| #9Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 27, 2017 6:39 pm | |
| Added dev threads, teleport tech has been approved. |
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| #10Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 27, 2017 8:51 pm | |
| With the teleporting tech, it says the longest distance is 10 meters and they're personal equipment, not teleporting machines that can spawn people. The ship would have to be VERY close for the raiding technology to work. |
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| #11Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 27, 2017 8:56 pm | |
| No, the 10 meter limitation is for the blinking armor only. The impalers use warp anchors. Do you need an app for it? |
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| #12Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 27, 2017 8:58 pm | |
| Since its a different kind of teleportation technology, kinda. yea. |
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| #13Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat May 27, 2017 8:59 pm | |
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| #14Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat Jun 03, 2017 12:11 am | |
| Impalers got approved, this app is ready. |
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| #15Subject: Re: Berserker viral Sat Jun 03, 2017 12:50 am | |
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