[size=37]Name: Ventus Viper[/size]
[size=37]Species: Humanoid Snake(Kabuto/Orochimaru)[/size]
[size=37]Age: 18[/size]
[size=37]Faction:[/size]
[size=37]Alignment: Chaotic[/size]


[size=37]Strengths:[/size]
[size=37]★ Flexibility: a capability given to him by his snake like genetics which allows him to slither, freely moving as a snake, it's rather useful when being evasive along with performing quick but fatal blows to his enemies.[/size]

[size=37]★Intelligent: Ventus has very good tactic skills, while using his brain he can come up with easy going solutions to certain problems just by using simply logic, the more he experiences the more smart he becomes as he adapts quickly to a task given to him.[/size]

[size=37]★Skilled In Combat: Ventus is a warrior of stealth, an assassin if you will, his moves are precise and diligent to an extent that for some you wouldn't be even able see him coming at all, he takes fighting very serious but he would first play with you to get to know your moves before making his attack.[/size]


[size=37]Weaknesses:[/size]

[size=37]★A fear of birds: Ventus for some reason hates birds as he fears them, once around a bird he simply freaks out and flees the area as he may think the bird may eat him which is absurd as he is bigger than the average bird, however it's his own weird phobia.[/size]

[size=37]★A fear of drowning: Ventus likes water but is frightened what lies in the depths of the sea, more water and potential drowning which is fears the most so he doesn't swim much in deep oceans.[/size]


[size=37]★Ice magic: Ventus is vulnerable to all cold like attacks along with cold environments as he is cold blooded.[/size]


[size=37]★Difficulty In Movement: Ventus if in a wide spread area without any objects to climb or to slither in, he is powerless when it comes to evading his opponent.[/size]

[size=37]Equipment:[/size]


[size=37]★Ventus uses light weapons as it is his style, he uses bladed chains as a weapon,  these chains are thin yet still thick enough to wrap around an open neck to decapitate it swiftly, the chain itself is a grey metal with the end of the chain having a arch sharp boomerang shaped blade. One could use this as a grappling hook if long enough to reach but the user would have to pull themselves up with their own arm strength. It's good for close to mid range attack yet not long range depending on the length of the chain as that determines how far it'll go exactly.[/size]

[size=37]★A vial of poison in a bottle, he uses this to add on his fangs to add an extra kick to his poisonous bite.[/size]

[size=37]Powers:[/size]
[size=37]★Duplication: Ventus is able to make up to 2 perfect duplicates of himself, these duplicates look just as the original but they don't have shadows so if you pay attention to whom does have a shadow you'll find Ventus. As his tier level increases he is able to summon one clone each tier level up. There able to interact with not only him but his enemies as well only dealing the same damage as the original’s tier level. 2  one tier level attacks are able to take them out, any here tier attack can easily poof the clone.[/size]

[size=37]Poisonous Bite: As a venomous Snake like creature Ventus posses the ability to send poison into his enemy's body, for every 1 post the victim does their health slowly begins to decrease, victim then could become unconscious but doesn't die, Ventus is able to negate the poison by re taking it from the spot he bit him/her from and insisting it back into his fangs.[/size]

[size=37]History:[/size]

[size=37]Ventus was born from a human female known as Irisa, she gave birth to a beautiful baby boy in the mere future like world filled with high technology yet they lived in the wooded areas to be safe, little did this boy knew that his life would surely change for the worse as upon the few minutes after his mother gave birth she died. His father who was a large snake guarded his child, this specimen of snake had arms though but no legs so he slithered throughout the land while holding his child leaving the mother to lay there dead. As he was birthed in the woods it wasn't a good place to leave a baby anywhere due to hungry creatures that are scattered all over the domain, for years Ventus was a depressed being as he found out of his mother's death by his father at the age of 7 which then he begun to despise his father for not doing anything about it. Arigon didn't really mind his child much and honestly didn't take him seriously as he saw him as careless as his mother was, as years went by Ventus grew more darker by the realization that his mom was never coming back, he then sought out to find his own way of life and flees from his father while he sleeps. Ventus takes his long voyage in this new advanced world filled with constant new technology, it was new to him once he discovered it but he still tries to adapt to any situation no matter what it is. Ventus will soon discover as the years go by what his demonic nature shall lead him to as he would surely be looking forward to it no doubt.[/size]

I'll beat the admins to this- you probably need to submit his race to the Codex. Other than that, he seems cool! I can't wait to see his fighting in action.

I've gotta say, this seems interesting, there's just a few things I'd like to point out before we can fully allow this character.

1. You have two obvious mental weaknesses to counteract your strengths, yet there's no way anyone would be able to exploit them without your character telling them, perhaps adding a physical weakness such as lack of strength to balance it out would be a good idea.

2. Starting at novice level, you say you can create 5 duplicates of yourself. This is too much for a first time character, so I must request that you either reduce that number of duplicates to 1 or 2 and have that number scale with your magic tier.

3. You talk a lot about post lengths and damage. This is not a combat RP board, and as such, we do not require you to state specific amounts of damage or post lengths for attacks. Please take that out and be reasonable during RP.

Definetely an interesting character. And, like Mavanger said, put this race in the Species submission codes, I'd love to see it!

Edited.

Looks awesome, have fun.