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[size=46]Name: [/size][size=46]Olivia Moera[/size]
[size=46]Species: [/size][size=46]Human[/size]
[size=46]Age: [/size][size=46]18[/size]
[size=46]Faction: [/size][size=46]Mordeci Smith[/size]
[size=46]Alignment: [/size][size=46]Mordeci Smith[/size]

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Strengths[/size]
[size=46]Assassinations[/size]
[size=46]Stalking Mordeci Smith[/size]


[size=46]Weaknesses
[/size][size=46]She is a stalker[/size]
[size=46]She has no sense of self-preservation[/size]
[size=46]As an assassin, Olivia has an extreme disadvantage in a fair fight, or against multiple targets[/size]


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Equipment
[/size][size=46]2x .45 caliber pistols:[/size]
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[size=46]8x Throwing Knives:[/size]
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[size=46]Powers
[/size][size=46]Extremely fast, she is able to easily blend into the shadows. (Not magic, just easily overlooked)[/size]

[size=46]History
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[size=46]Olivia was born on a distant planet. Her parents, like those on Guerre, fought demons daily. They made a good living this way, until the Demons attacked. They tore through the planet, destroying all opposition. Olivia, hidden under debris, watched as her parents were butchered and devoured by a horde of demons. Ever since that day, she pledged herself to their destruction.
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[size=46]Due to her small size, Olivia was unable to excel at being a standard soldier. Thus, she went a different route. Instead of working on destroying as many Demons as possible, Olivia trained her body to be as fast as possible. With only light armor, she grew her speed to be able to match the average demon. [/size]


[size=46]Her small frame also lent itself to easily being able to sneak around. She trained herself to be able to tell roughly what is around her by sound alone, though this doesn't help her identify the terrain all that well.[/size]


[size=46]She travelled for a short while, killing demons as she went. That was until she landed on Guerre. A planet full of demon hunters, Olivia had decided to make this place home. It wasn't long after this that Mordeci Smith, now the Grand Inquisitor, arrived. He told of the evils of Magic and why it needed to be purged. Olivia saw the greatness of the man, it drew her to him. Then and there, the moment she first met him, Olivia pledged herself to him and his cause.[/size]

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She is very fast and is able to stop an entire platoon of the Reich's soldiers by herself. Her accuracy with her pistols and throwing knives is pinpoint.

Erm, according to wikipedia, a platoon of soldiers is between 15-30 soldiers and I just don't see how a random 18 year old girl is capable of taking down that many professional soldiers. At least have some kind of extensive history justifying how she has these kinds of skills.

How is that Elias?

This character needs a heavy nerf. 

1. her strengths by killing "anyone" is borderline godmod

2. she has no real weaknesses

3. 18 year old girl cannot outfight 7 armed men.

This needs HEAVY balancing. I'm placing this officially under review, until this character is balanced .

Completely revamped!

She is now an assassin!

Now, she's fine

YAY!

Thank you Def