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 |  #1 Subject: Dryads  Tue Apr 25, 2017 7:14 pm | |
| Name: Dryads Homeplanet: TK-47 (Talamh) Sentience: Sentient Strengths The Dryads excel at taming and breeding creatures, as they are trees. They are also very advanced in golemancy and almost all realms of magic. This mastery of magic is not intrinsic to every Dryad though. Weaknesses They lack any understanding of other technologies and are unable to mass-produce anything. Due to the that they are much like the Sprucen in their constitution the Dryads are extremely susceptle to fire. Which makes the Diotean a very lonely group within Dryadic culture. Culture The Dryads have a dual culture. They are divided into the Adhmad, or Life, faction and the Miotal, or Metal, faction. They are led by the Council of the Foraoise, which is made up of 5 Adhmad and 5 Miotal. They revere life and the infusion of life in metal. They have no problems with necromancers for the are also manipulators of life. They do, however, dislike those that kill merely for the sake of killing. History The Dryads came into existence on Talamh. However, the Miotal and the Adhmad soon went to war, destroying their planet. They were forced to join forces, resulting in the creation of the Farthach Spas. Leaving behind their old world, the Dryads roamed Uncharted space. Now, however, after their long departure have returned to reclaim their home world.
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| | #2Subject: Re: Dryads Tue May 02, 2017 5:30 pm | |
| Okay, time to flex the reviewing fingers...
Reading over this, I'm noticing a few problems:
1. I'm going to need a lot of description about this manipulation of life magic. The way it's explained here makes the magic sound like you can godmod any form of life.
2. Simply not understanding technology isn't enough of a weakness to counteract their magic since said magic basically nullifies any need to understand technology in the first place. Please replace that with an actual weakness.
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| | #3Subject: Re: Dryads Tue May 02, 2017 9:30 pm | |
| Updated!
Plus, lore posts, all will be explained there. And their whole manipulation of life thing isn't all that OP. Considering they can't mass produce anything like the rest of you crazy people. |
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| | #4Subject: Re: Dryads Wed May 03, 2017 12:19 am | |
| First off, you did not do as I asked. And after careful deliberation with fellow staff, we have decided that any sort of manipulation of life is in fact godmodding and is therefore not allowed. I'm afraid you will have to replace your magical ability to manipulate life with something else. |
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| | #5Subject: Re: Dryads Wed May 03, 2017 1:06 pm | |
| Ok, updated the strengths part, they can still use magic to help with breeding and taming though. |
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