Convergence RP Archive
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
HomeRulesTimelineLatest imagesFactionsEventsMapSearchRegisterLog in
Click HERE to join our Discord Chat!
Remember to vote for us HERE!

Share
 

 Farthach Spas

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Drake
Level 26
Drake

Character
Neutral
Posts : 309
Reputation : 0
Alive

Awards
Farthach Spas LiSt9Q4 Member of the Month

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#1PostSubject: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyTue Apr 25, 2017 5:31 pm

Farthach Spas Leviathan_by_iron_fox-d63j82l


Name: Farthach Spas
Owner: The Dryadic Foraoise (Faction)
Manufacturer: The Dryadic Foraoise


Development Thread: Extremely powerful and important ships require a thread to work for them. Put N/A if not needed.

Materials: A living creature
Length: 500 meters
Rarity: Unique
Grades
Grade the aspects of the ship below between 1-10. 1 being severely lacking in that aspect, 10 being specialized. Keep things balanced.
Weapons: 2
Armour: 5
Shields: 4
Speed: 6
Maneuvers: 3

Notable Equipment

Arms - The only true weapon on the Farthach Spas, its arms are able to defend itself from close range attacks. The arms of the beast are extremely slow, thus they are only truly devastating to ships that are smaller than 300 meters.


Hide - The hide of the beast is extremely durable, giving it a lot of protection from attacks of any kind. As the Purog, the Earth mages of the Dryads, enchanted its hide, the Farthach Spas is extremely durable against any solid weapon or explosive. It is much weaker against lasers or any other kind of energy based weapon.

Description


The Farthach Spas was developed by the remnants of the Dryads of Talamh. After destroying their world, the Dryads joined forces to create some way of escaping their own destruction. The Farthach Spas was the result of that coalition.

The Ship is a self-contained living ecosystem. It can hold up to 10,000 human-sized lifeforms, though most of this space is taken up by the lifeforms within the ship itself. Thus, only half of that space is left for any kind of passenger. Currently, the ship all 500 of the remaining Dryads and the 1000 of their Golems.

In the sides of the Leviathan's mouth are hangar bays for the smaller creatures within their fleet.

Due to its inefficencies in combat, the Farthach Spas is useless against a larger ship.


Last edited by Drake on Thu Apr 27, 2017 12:23 pm; edited 3 times in total
Back to top Go down
http://www.convergencerp.net/t1192-elizabeth-penry
Defaox
Banned
DefaoxBanned


Character
Neutral
Posts : 1034
Reputation : 8
Alive

Awards

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#2PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:01 pm

There are a few things that need to be addressed.

1. How does this living creature breath in space? As starships are vehicles that only go into space.The environment is -445 F, making it near impossible for living beings to survival in space, not counting bacteria within frozen comets or asteroids. How does this creature move? With no real propulsion system and no O2, its going to be impossible for this to move

2. With a pure melee combat and weapons rating of 2, it shouldn't be able to be devastating to ships as it has to get in close to even try to do damage.

3. Hide armor, this kind of armor can only get you so far. With an armor rating of 5, it shouldn't be able to protect damage of any kind as laser and up can easily break through Hide armor.
Back to top Go down
Drake
Level 26
Drake

Character
Neutral
Posts : 309
Reputation : 0
Alive

Awards
Farthach Spas LiSt9Q4 Member of the Month

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#3PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:13 pm

1) Self-contained ecosystem. The Farthach Spas recycles its own CO2 to produce oxygen that it can then use.

2) I put the combat rating as a 2 because it is pure melee and is very slow. That does not mean that when it hits it does just wreck shit. What it means is that it doesn't usually hit, thus the overall prowess of its combat abilities would be a 2.

3)Magic. Updated the Hide portion.
Back to top Go down
http://www.convergencerp.net/t1192-elizabeth-penry
Defaox
Banned
DefaoxBanned


Character
Neutral
Posts : 1034
Reputation : 8
Alive

Awards

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#4PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:35 pm

Ok, then you need to alter the info about its arms. If the attack is slow, it could only truly be devastating to smaller ships at the size of 300 meters or smaller
Back to top Go down
Drake
Level 26
Drake

Character
Neutral
Posts : 309
Reputation : 0
Alive

Awards
Farthach Spas LiSt9Q4 Member of the Month

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#5PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:40 pm

Updated!
Back to top Go down
http://www.convergencerp.net/t1192-elizabeth-penry
Defaox
Banned
DefaoxBanned


Character
Neutral
Posts : 1034
Reputation : 8
Alive

Awards

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#6PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 7:35 pm

OK, the Hide Armor should be weaker against Laser or energy weaponry. Since Hide can only protect it for so long. 500 meter living creature cannot withstand a 500+ meter ship in fire power.
Back to top Go down
Drake
Level 26
Drake

Character
Neutral
Posts : 309
Reputation : 0
Alive

Awards
Farthach Spas LiSt9Q4 Member of the Month

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#7PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyThu Apr 27, 2017 12:23 pm

updated!
Back to top Go down
http://www.convergencerp.net/t1192-elizabeth-penry
Defaox
Banned
DefaoxBanned


Character
Neutral
Posts : 1034
Reputation : 8
Alive

Awards

Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#8PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas EmptyThu Apr 27, 2017 7:44 pm

Approved
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content




Farthach Spas Empty
Approved#9PostSubject: Re: Farthach Spas   Farthach Spas Empty

Back to top Go down
 

Farthach Spas

View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Convergence RP Archive :: Codex Archives :: Starship Creation :: Approved Starships-