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Approved#1PostSubject: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 4:35 pm

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Name: Teagartha Ean
Owner: The Dryadic Foraoise
Manufacturer: The Adhmad Faction


Development Thread: https://convergencerp.rpg-board.net/t1368-to-raise-a-teagartha-ean#8317

Type: It's a giant bird
Materials: Once again, it's a bird
Length/Height: They are 40 meters in length (beak to tail), 30 meters tall when standing

Rarity: Common

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Weapons: 2
Armour: 2
Shields: 1
Speed: 7
Handling: 8


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The Teagartha Ean are deployed by the Farthach Spas, carrying large bus-shaped containers in their talons. These are used for the transportation of people and goods between the Farthach Spas and whatever planet it is close to.


The Carriers are about 20 meters long and are able to carry up to fifty Dryads in one load.

A Farthach Spas is able to keep twenty Teagartha Ean with it.


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Approved#2PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 5:38 pm

OK, there are a few things that need to be addressed.

1. If this is just a bird, it would have no shields and very little armor. Because its just a bird, it probably would most likely have 1 or at least 2 armor. It wouldn't have shields because only technology or magically beings could create shields.

2. The length is an issue. If its over 15 meters in length. You need a Dev thread.

3. This also seems like a species and not really a "vehicle". Though, if you want to add it to your military might. You need to alter the things I have listed.
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Approved#3PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 5:51 pm

hey Def,

I've updated it with the first part. The thought was: giant bird -> giant feathers -> harder to pierce -> more defense

As for the Dev thread, I will be using them a lot, so they will appear in most of my other Dev threads and thus I thought that it would be alright. If this train of thought is wrong, then please let me know. 

As for the last one. The might of the Dryadic Foraoise is in a great part, a bunch of animals. Thus, I believe that it would be slightly detrimental to their purpose to shove all of them into the species tab. If I was to do that, then I would also need to put the Farthach Spas and the Siolta in that tab as well. Seeing as they are living creatures as well.

Let me know if I still need to change anything.
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Approved#4PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:14 pm

No worries, Ironically enough you're the first Faction to use living creatures within their military. So, dealing with the app is new "territory" for me, lol.

OK!

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Just follow these guidelines for making vehicles and to know how much you need to post for dev threads.
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Approved#5PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:18 pm

Would it be alright if I made a thread detailing the hatching and raising of the Teagartha Ean as its Dev thread?

Not really a development thread because the Dryads have already had them for some time now.
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Approved#6PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:21 pm

All good Smile, go right ahead.
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Approved#7PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:24 pm

ok! It'll probably be up tomorrow, and would it be alright if it was a Lore post instead of an RP thread (a very long lore post)?
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Approved#8PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:28 pm

No, it needs to be an rp thread.
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Approved#9PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 6:29 pm

Ok, can do! will have it up tomorrow!
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Approved#10PostSubject: Re: Teagartha Ean   Teagartha Ean EmptyFri Apr 28, 2017 3:13 pm

Updated!

Does have a full Dev thread!
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