Name: T'Zustan
Owner: Necromancers, Everyone
Creator: Dark Cult of Ztankas

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Type: Dark Blade
Ammo: N/A
Rarity: Unique

Strengths
The blade is like a regular blade but it glows with dark matter and can have a toxic effect.

Weaknesses
Weak to light matter

Description
This blade was found in the temple of the cult of Ztankas. It is long and thin, and laced with string of dark mist. It radiates a chilling heat and some say that you can hear the voices of the dead speak through it. The only thing special about it is that if can cut through ghosts and the undead without a lot of effort.

Looks simple enough, everything looks good enough, but I need a few things better detailed before this can be approved

1. You say the sword glows with 'dark matter'. Is this purely for aesthetic? Or does it have a direct effect on the power of the sword.

2. What exactly is the 'toxic effect' the sword has. i.e. how does the toxin work/how powerful is it.

3. Define light matter. Without further definition, we cannot properly utillize this weakness. My interpretation so far is that 'light matter' is simply light magic. Additionally, the statement 'weak to light matter' suggests that it can be destroyed by whatever light matter is, which is something I don't imagine you want happening.

1) Just for effect
2) Poisonous and makes the victim feel ill
3) White matter just means magic that is 'good', in a sense. Like most people picture God surrounded by white light and not black emptiness. It can be destroyed if the magic is strong and overpowering. And I want it to be destroyed, although Wynnter would die because a part of her soul is inside. That's why she's trying to Reverse her curse.

Please make those edits to your initial post.

Archived due to inactivity. Please resubmit completed if you want to have this judged.